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| public domain photo - credits appear below |
Broken
Felt bedrock
rumble
credence
stumble
footings
fissure, fracture
foundation
crumple
convictions
collapse
chasm
open up
crystal trust
trembled,
shattered
jigsaw
puzzle
jumbled,
scattered
faithful
fragments
guzzled,
gobbled whole
Only
muddle remains
tangled
wires
knotting
ragged
scraps
together
public domain photo credits:
| Description | Demolition of the partially pancaked multi story car park above the old Smiths City building. Taken from the Moorhouse-Colombo flyover. Close up showing someone's car visible inside the collapsed building. |
| Date | 22 March 2011, 09:02:24 |
| Source | Flickr: Smiths City Car Park |
| Author | David Collins |
Such expressive energetic words, fits the topic perfectly, Pamela!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hannah! So glad you enjoyed it. :-)
DeleteThis is excellent, Pamela. Love all the alliteration and assonance happening here. My ears like this poem as much as my heart does.
ReplyDeleteOooh thanks, De! Pleasing ears is always a good thing! :-))
DeleteI loved reading this! The words just went together like bread on butter.
ReplyDelete:-)) Thanks, Dana! Bread on butter... I usually think of that relationship swapped around, but... I like it! LOL
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