Wednesday, September 5, 2012

A FINE RAIN (a small stone)





A Fine Rain

a wet, gray day
beyond my window
climbing the wall, clematis
blossoms beckon
(I comply)
little engine whirs
at my shoulder
all but invisible
hummingbird hovers
even the rain is fine


© PSC – 2012            



6 comments:

  1. This is such a sweet glimpse of summer!
    I like that "fine rain" that falls when the temperature is still warm & it just freshens everything outdoors.

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    1. Thanks, Patricia! Glad you stopped by to enjoy. :-)

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  2. Loved the quiet simplicity of this, esp the closing line.

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    1. Thanks, Mosk! I think it was the blossoms and the hummingbird that made the rain appear so fine. ;-)

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  3. We had a day like this yesterday. It was just a sweet little rain refreshing us.It brought cooler temps with it. I love the third pic of the flowers.

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    1. Thanks, Dana! I love these clematis blossoms -- so dainty and sweet. Glad you enjoyed them too! :-)

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