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Nexus
It was one of those odd dreams
suspended, somewhere, between fancy and fact:
loved ones, long gone – and others --
get in a car, together,
hugs and goodbyes, and they’re on their way,
a favorite song on the radio,
still playing in my head upon opening my eyes.
And when I awoke,
I found a locked door – left open all night --
giving my mind leave to wander…
PSC / 2012
A "small stone" from Jan 28, 2012.
Revisiting this older poem, as it meshes well with this week'sTuesday prompt at dVerse - Poet's Pub: Open a New Door With Me
Revisiting this older poem, as it meshes well with this week'sTuesday prompt at dVerse - Poet's Pub: Open a New Door With Me
"somewhere between fancy and fact" -- love this, especially.
ReplyDeleteThanks! :) (And loved yours too!)
DeleteOh I love this! Those spirits meandered in and communed with you. Wonderful response to the prompt. Thanks so much for posting!
ReplyDeleteThank you! That's exactly what they did -- meandered in... and invited me to meander along. ;)
DeleteInteresting take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThe older piece worded very well; my home is rife with energy portals, & visitors interact with us when awake, or asleep.
ReplyDeleteI love that they do -- I find it so intriguing. Thanks for reading & commenting, Glenn. :)
DeleteStrangest Door of minD..
ReplyDeleteHospital tAble cOld..
no more words..
Cold as
ice..
say
goodbye..
wake in cotton
clouds.. fuzzy
warm deliGht oF
Sleeping DreAM
aWake.. diD
i reAlly diE..
iS thiS reallY
heaVen noW..
enJoy iT while
It lasts lesSons
oF Hell iN Heaven's
Hell Of Heaven aGain..
40 days of no Sleep ..
INsomnia
DreAMs..
Back a LiFe..
ps.. True Story..
Door to LiGht oF LiFe..:)
Thanks for sharing this Kate!
DeleteThe locked door left open all night ... So contrary as what dreams can be. Loved the authenticity of this.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading & commenting -- glad you enjoyed it. That open door upon waking -- it felt like an extension of the dream... as if the message was still being sent. Very intriguing!
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